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About Me Member Varied Artist Skater4Art20/Male/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 4 Years
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i remember...

Tue May 6, 2008, 10:26 AM
the feeling of her thoughts around obscure components
keeps the world dangling upon her finger
eye lash, sunday dress, and planted trees
turned down the sheets
and exhaled with the stars
as fading wishes
swaps business cards with fading dreams
but her eyes still echo the obscene
a blurred vision of love
as the metaphysical is played second fiddle
but "what happens to a dream deferred?"
does it sizzle and pop?
or fizzle and drop?

its meaning has to compensate for something...
books half-read
and hearts half-broken
as you count
and count some more

he swirl sweat upon your chest
as your fingers seem to stimulate every bump and every being
taken out and written down
taken for granted
the words that pierce
and the minds that speak
to dark clouds
and stagnant balloons
sifting through an eclipse of a nooned sky.

  • Mood: Neutral
  • Listening to: An American Prayer- Jim Morrison
  • Reading: Jack Keroac- Desolation Angels

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  • Current Residence: Chicago
  • Interests: writing, music, hanging, singing, life
  • Favourite movie: wedding crashers, anchor man, orange county
  • Favourite band or musician: dylan, hendrix, the doors, donovan, marc bolan
  • Favourite genre of music: classic rock and anything i like
  • Favourite poet or writer: Jim Morrison
  • Tools of the Trade: heart

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:iconilikedorks757:
oh! i didn't realize you left me a comment on this website until now..
but you're welcome for liking your poem! thank you for writing something that awesome, so that i could enjoy it.
&to answer your question, i've been pretty good. my graduation is today so i'm fairly excited about that.. and earlier today i was on Birchwood. that street is everywhere.
how've you been? i'm guessing you're back home for the summer now..?

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:iconlouisadamsdouglas:
i say this word baby hahahahahahaha
:iconilikedorks757:
NO YOU DIDN'T! ahh.
use 2 sides of the paper.
goshh.

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:iconilikedorks757:
i really like them. especially 'the girl i known'. its sweeeeet.

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:iconilikedorks757:
YOU HAVE A STATUE OF A NAKED WOMAN IN YOUR FAVORITES!!!! freak

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:iconilikedorks757:
youwish!!!!!
aiiioiahdf!

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:iconkileyb:
tanky tanky

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I can't forget the smell of summer trees at midnight. -3eb
:iconbatdesignz:
Thank You so much for :+fav: on this work :heart:

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